Score: 6

"ok"

submission: Ackbar : The Movie

date: April 22, 2007

It was an ok animation, the graphics were not very good as they are just pictures, if you designed them in flash it might have been better. The sound was good and the joke was good. Also, if you could do a bit more animating (like making them walk or lip syncing), that would make it much better.

Overall, ok.

(Review Request Club)

Score: 7

"Nice!!"

submission: Linerider the Movie

date: April 13, 2007

Nice animation, quite humourous, but there are many line riders movies made, if you made a storyline, it might hve improved. Sound effects might have improved it as well.

Overall, nice animation!

(Review Request Club)

Score: 7

"funny!"

submission: Graham's Weird Day (3/3)

date: April 13, 2007

Funny short. I liked the joke, but for me it was too short to judge it thoroughly. The graphics were alright. I could hear the voices and understand them easily so thats a plus point. To improve, maybe you could put all the shorts together in one final flash so its easy to understand and get all the jokes.

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Score: 3

"Could use a lot of work"

submission: Heroes 2: NYC

date: April 13, 2007

Better than the last one. Drawn backgrouds could be better,the driving game was annoying, the controls could have made better. If you develop your actionscript, this could good. This time you put text instead a voice, which made it easier to understand but as the persons mouth was moving, it ruined it for me. This had a better plot than the one before.

Overall, improve it a lot more, it could be good.

(Review Request Club)

Score: 2

"Boring!"

submission: Heroes 1: Hiro

date: April 13, 2007

This flash was very boring. The graphics were not very good, the characters could have been drawn better and the backgrounds could have been drawn in flash instead of using pictures. The lip syncing was really off, if you put some more effort into it, it might have been better. The sound was also very bad, if you got better voices, it would be better.

Overall, not very good and could improve it by a lot. Good luck!!

(Review Request Club)

Score: 8

"wicked animation!"

submission: NG Audio Portal

date: April 13, 2007

Very nice animation. The graphics were really good and so was the animation. The storyline of the flash was really good especially when you shown what could happen in real life if the audio portal was a physical place. The sound was nice and it suited the animation as it plays on the frontpage of Audio portal. A bit longer might have made it better but might have lowered the quality.

Overall, nice animation, can't wait to see more from you!!

(Review Request Club)

Score: 6

"Nice parody!"

submission: Dockatar: The random guy

date: April 13, 2007

I like how you used the avatar for this animation, it was quite good good and funny. The 3d map bit was really good and the graphics were quite good. The only problem was the sound, it was quite hard to understand it.

Subtitles may have helped but as you said before it could take up room. Why not just put words on screen without using a black bar so the word appear on the screen and you can change the text colour to suit the background? Also, if the speech was a bit more slow, it might be easier to understand.

Overall, nice animation, get the sound right and it'll be good.

(Review Request Club)

Score: 5

"Ok animation"

submission: car and driveway

date: April 12, 2007

This was an ok animation. The graphics sould have been improved by quite a lot but seeing as it is your first submission, its ok and I know you will probably get much better in the future and so I can't wait to see your next animation. The storyline was ok and so were the sound effects. Overall it was an ok animation which could be improved.

(Review Request Club)

Score: 6

"confusing"

submission: WTF short

date: April 12, 2007

Unfortunetly I didn't understand most of it as it was too short and I was confused what happened at the end. The graphics were quite good and theren't many sound effects but overall it could have been made better.

(Review Request Club)

Score: 8

"really good!!"

submission: 30 Hour Challenge

date: April 12, 2007

It was really nice to see many unique styles put into one flash. I love this type of work. This was a really good piece of work especially since it was done in 30 hours. One thing you could have done is added a flash button. Also, make more of these e.g. 10 hours to see what you get. Can't wait to see another one if you do another one.

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