It was an ok animation, the graphics were not very good as they are just pictures, if you designed them in flash it might have been better. The sound was good and the joke was good. Also, if you could do a bit more animating (like making them walk or lip syncing), that would make it much better.
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Nice animation, quite humourous, but there are many line riders movies made, if you made a storyline, it might hve improved. Sound effects might have improved it as well.
Overall, nice animation!
theres other linerider movies? huh, didntt know that, anyway thanks for the reveiw.
Funny short. I liked the joke, but for me it was too short to judge it thoroughly. The graphics were alright. I could hear the voices and understand them easily so thats a plus point. To improve, maybe you could put all the shorts together in one final flash so its easy to understand and get all the jokes.
Nah, I prefer them separated. Thanks for reviewing, however.
Very nice animation. The graphics were really good and so was the animation. The storyline of the flash was really good especially when you shown what could happen in real life if the audio portal was a physical place. The sound was nice and it suited the animation as it plays on the frontpage of Audio portal. A bit longer might have made it better but might have lowered the quality.
Overall, nice animation, can't wait to see more from you!!
I like how you used the avatar for this animation, it was quite good good and funny. The 3d map bit was really good and the graphics were quite good. The only problem was the sound, it was quite hard to understand it.
Subtitles may have helped but as you said before it could take up room. Why not just put words on screen without using a black bar so the word appear on the screen and you can change the text colour to suit the background? Also, if the speech was a bit more slow, it might be easier to understand.
Overall, nice animation, get the sound right and it'll be good.
OK, thanks (:
This was an ok animation. The graphics sould have been improved by quite a lot but seeing as it is your first submission, its ok and I know you will probably get much better in the future and so I can't wait to see your next animation. The storyline was ok and so were the sound effects. Overall it was an ok animation which could be improved.
Unfortunetly I didn't understand most of it as it was too short and I was confused what happened at the end. The graphics were quite good and theren't many sound effects but overall it could have been made better.
It was really nice to see many unique styles put into one flash. I love this type of work. This was a really good piece of work especially since it was done in 30 hours. One thing you could have done is added a flash button. Also, make more of these e.g. 10 hours to see what you get. Can't wait to see another one if you do another one.
What do you mean "flash button". Just wondering.
There is anothero ne out (30 hour limitation) and it is better!
This was a really good animation with a lot of clever and amusing jokes especially the last one. The graphics were really good and so was everything else. One thing you can do is make the screen size bigger so we can see more details of the people but other than that, it is really good. Can't wait to see more of your animations!
Thanks very much. I'll consider doubling the screen-size next time - be sure to look out for it :D
Nice flash for a April fool's joke. The speech was quite good especially when you revealed it was a joke but since it was a few days off, it took of some of the effect but still it made me laugh. Overall, nice flash, hope to see more from you, thats just as funny, if not even more.
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I have some good stories in my head right now. Perhaps they will be funnier, but for the funniness, I guess I usually leave it up to my friend and know how funny it is to him. :P
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