Abs55's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Linerider the Movie]

Nice!!

Nice animation, quite humourous, but there are many line riders movies made, if you made a storyline, it might hve improved. Sound effects might have improved it as well.

Overall, nice animation!

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king-ben responds:

theres other linerider movies? huh, didntt know that, anyway thanks for the reveiw.

[Graham's Weird Day (3/3)]

funny!

Funny short. I liked the joke, but for me it was too short to judge it thoroughly. The graphics were alright. I could hear the voices and understand them easily so thats a plus point. To improve, maybe you could put all the shorts together in one final flash so its easy to understand and get all the jokes.

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kinggila responds:

Nah, I prefer them separated. Thanks for reviewing, however.

[Dockatar: The random guy]

Nice parody!

I like how you used the avatar for this animation, it was quite good good and funny. The 3d map bit was really good and the graphics were quite good. The only problem was the sound, it was quite hard to understand it.

Subtitles may have helped but as you said before it could take up room. Why not just put words on screen without using a black bar so the word appear on the screen and you can change the text colour to suit the background? Also, if the speech was a bit more slow, it might be easier to understand.

Overall, nice animation, get the sound right and it'll be good.

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IZSBHR responds:

OK, thanks (:

[30 Hour Challenge]

really good!!

It was really nice to see many unique styles put into one flash. I love this type of work. This was a really good piece of work especially since it was done in 30 hours. One thing you could have done is added a flash button. Also, make more of these e.g. 10 hours to see what you get. Can't wait to see another one if you do another one.

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yodd responds:

What do you mean "flash button". Just wondering.

There is anothero ne out (30 hour limitation) and it is better!

[Moose Stains]

really funny

This was a really good animation with a lot of clever and amusing jokes especially the last one. The graphics were really good and so was everything else. One thing you can do is make the screen size bigger so we can see more details of the people but other than that, it is really good. Can't wait to see more of your animations!

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BritishMoose responds:

Thanks very much. I'll consider doubling the screen-size next time - be sure to look out for it :D

[My Last Flash Ever!]

Funny!

Nice flash for a April fool's joke. The speech was quite good especially when you revealed it was a joke but since it was a few days off, it took of some of the effect but still it made me laugh. Overall, nice flash, hope to see more from you, thats just as funny, if not even more.

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kinggila responds:

I have some good stories in my head right now. Perhaps they will be funnier, but for the funniness, I guess I usually leave it up to my friend and know how funny it is to him. :P

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 1]

OK

This was an okay flash. It wasn't really good or really bad. I liked the jokes and how you put music for each one of the characters introductions.

Having said that, you could have added more of a background to the whole thing. You could make it a bit faster as I thought it went a bit slow.

Also, I thought nothing much happened, I know this is just an intro but you could have added a bit more action, it might have improved it. But overall an okay animation.

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Jimtopia responds:

Thanks for the review.

[How Badass is he? -T.L.L.]

Great animation

This flash had a lot of humor in it. The voices were good and the sprites were great. However, the camera angle stayed static and the movie size could have been bigger. The spelling mistakes weren't that huge. Great animation though!

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Emptygoddess responds:

Well, if the camera moved it would have put great strain on the pixels forcing them to become polygons. Something they are not ready to do.

[The Legend of Link Part 4]

Nice ending!

The ending of this 4 part movie was great. You sustained the comedy throughout the whole series. The fight at the end was very funny especially the sucker throw.

I noticed that when the screen moved up and down at the beginning, it didn't move very smoothly. The screen should be bigger as I said before. The camera angle could be changed to give it more 'umph'. But overall, it was great and I really enjoyed it.

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Emptygoddess responds:

That's because the screen moved by pixels. Pixels are the natural form of measurement in sprite artwork. A pixel is exactly as far as one pixel.

[The Legend of Link Part 3]

Just as good as the last one!

This was just as funny as the last one, if not more. Instead of just using one type of camera why not zoom in at parts and also look at characters faces at times so you see there expressions. This will make it more engaging to the user. Also, like I said before the stage could be enlarged but nice overall.

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Emptygoddess responds:

because i don't want to and i hate you.